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As i was reading this, i noticed the art first. It was good but i noticed some inconsisten...

BigDaddyNanarrs August 28, 2026 11:19 pm

As i was reading this, i noticed the art first. It was good but i noticed some inconsistencies? Thats when i saw the summary that notes AI was used in some parts. Then it had me thinking that this story had potential, but it lacks ALOT of depth. Its slop to me and its really sad to see AI. I have no problem with a little bit of AI, but its the fact that every panel i read i question the art because it has alot of INCONSISTENCIES that doesnt make sense.


Overall, this is a 4/10 (4 for the potential it couldve had) the story is very lacking and feels like it has no depth or no narrating, like when it instantly cut to the second test (landing a hit on the teacher.) instead of actually showing his life at the academy or showing more in depth of how it is there and whats his plan. (Im not sure if im explaining this right but it just seems to rushed overall hopefully you get what i mean.)


This is just my opinion, good luck reading this, and have fun.

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    Argueta September 2, 2026 6:56 am

    I notice it was a slop early on, something just didn't click, and yes that definitely is the case, the art is inconsistent and the plot too, they got to the academy and just go test after test like those chinese manwha were the protagonists is constantly mocked and tested, courting death scenarios and whatnot, theres no dept nor world building in this.