The story development is suffocating under something, I just can't put my finger on it. The characters they are now seem void and depleted of who they where in the beginning. I miss the bravado untouchable gangsta and the dominant no-none sense intimidating prisoner. When Mujin walked in the room with the Shaman, I almost burst out laughing because you can tell the author was working hard on that aura entry
The story development is suffocating under something, I just can't put my finger on it. The characters they are now seem void and depleted of who they where in the beginning. I miss the bravado untouchable gangsta and the dominant no-none sense intimidating prisoner. When Mujin walked in the room with the Shaman, I almost burst out laughing because you can tell the author was working hard on that aura entry