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Story was there but the execution was very choppy

Story was there but the execution was very ch...
MoonShine August 29, 2026 6:43 pm

Story was there but the execution was very choppy

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    kettunen September 1, 2026 4:42 pm

    Yeah the plot was good but I think 6 chapters was too short for it to land properly

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