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Finished the story, now here's my thought

cesskim08 August 30, 2026 3:46 am

The pacing could've been a lot slower.
To give focus on backstory,
In depth exploration of the character,
Their relationship, their work, surroundings,
And organization conflicts.

I felt there was not much that happened.
Yes, they ended up together, but hmmmm.

Felt like something was missing.


But, in the end, this just for me.¯_(ツ)_/¯
If this kind of pacing worked for everybody else, then good for them.
No hate tho o((*^▽^*))o

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