Can't believe it was worth to sacrifice my sleep for this. The story and world building is solid. No loose ends or loop holes I can think of. All of them are just selfish for their own goals. You would think if they flipped their personality, this will not be bitter sweet ending to us readers but this is where they wanted to be.
I love the flashback. Oh how I wish they were able to bring back that affection to the present. The little banter they had at the lake was cute. Finally saw Rothbarf (sorry that's how I read it always) with different expression other than coming, angry or emotionless. The sidestories were amazing. It really kept the characters grounded and remind us readers that the characters will control everything not to change after that fiasco.
I understand were Rothbarf's hatred coming from. He's like a woman who keeps bringing up the past lies and cheating everytime her man fuckS up or just when she feels like to remind him of his past grievances to her LMAO.
For the smut? Well fucking done. The emotions were drawn great. The positions and areas they fucked are memorable and traumatizing. She got manhandled so much mygod. Without the fucking, the story will thrive but where's the trauma in that?
Can't believe it was worth to sacrifice my sleep for this. The story and world building is solid. No loose ends or loop holes I can think of. All of them are just selfish for their own goals. You would think if they flipped their personality, this will not be bitter sweet ending to us readers but this is where they wanted to be.
I love the flashback. Oh how I wish they were able to bring back that affection to the present. The little banter they had at the lake was cute. Finally saw Rothbarf (sorry that's how I read it always) with different expression other than coming, angry or emotionless. The sidestories were amazing. It really kept the characters grounded and remind us readers that the characters will control everything not to change after that fiasco.
I understand were Rothbarf's hatred coming from. He's like a woman who keeps bringing up the past lies and cheating everytime her man fuckS up or just when she feels like to remind him of his past grievances to her LMAO.
For the smut? Well fucking done. The emotions were drawn great. The positions and areas they fucked are memorable and traumatizing. She got manhandled so much mygod. Without the fucking, the story will thrive but where's the trauma in that?