The world building is bad, the source of power is ambiguous, no clear sign and reason of why everyone is manifesting. Also if the root of their rivalry is so deep that makes them kill each other, ain't no way they just reconcile like that. Also I can't believe he's in love with the person who murder his colleagues and harming his own mother.
The world building is bad, the source of power is ambiguous, no clear sign and reason of why everyone is manifesting. Also if the root of their rivalry is so deep that makes them kill each other, ain't no way they just reconcile like that. Also I can't believe he's in love with the person who murder his colleagues and harming his own mother.