I genuinely think Heartless is a really good story, and I want to make that clear because none of this is me saying that it's bad or trying to deter anyone from reading it. As a matter of fact, it's the complete opposite; READ IT. I absolutely recommend it.
It kept me hooked, intrigued, and invested, and I think that's exactly why I'm left with this feeling that I wanted more from it. What the story already has is extremely compelling that you can't help but care about what you feel is missing. There is so much potential in its characters, themes, and overall story that it feels like it has all the makings of something truly exceptional.
Maybe that's the best way I can put it: "You gave me enough to see the masterpiece this could have been, but not enough to actually let it become one."
In other words... rather than it being too short, I wanted it to explore DEEPER. I simply want more of "Heartless", I just can't let it go.
Heartless.
Where to begin.
I genuinely think Heartless is a really good story, and I want to make that clear because none of this is me saying that it's bad or trying to deter anyone from reading it. As a matter of fact, it's the complete opposite; READ IT. I absolutely recommend it.
It kept me hooked, intrigued, and invested, and I think that's exactly why I'm left with this feeling that I wanted more from it. What the story already has is extremely compelling that you can't help but care about what you feel is missing. There is so much potential in its characters, themes, and overall story that it feels like it has all the makings of something truly exceptional.
Maybe that's the best way I can put it: "You gave me enough to see the masterpiece this could have been, but not enough to actually let it become one."
In other words... rather than it being too short, I wanted it to explore DEEPER. I simply want more of "Heartless", I just can't let it go.