The story's conflict feels kind of all over the place to me. FL dies constantly like in most time loop stories, but her deaths don't have much impact to me. Also her relationship with the ML feels way too underbaked for them to be written so... Affectionate with one another. It feels like the author should've stuck to one point of conflict that results in her death. The story isn't boring though, since the amount of random secrets that get revealed are interesting... I guess.
The story's conflict feels kind of all over the place to me. FL dies constantly like in most time loop stories, but her deaths don't have much impact to me. Also her relationship with the ML feels way too underbaked for them to be written so... Affectionate with one another. It feels like the author should've stuck to one point of conflict that results in her death. The story isn't boring though, since the amount of random secrets that get revealed are interesting... I guess.