It was an okay read! But one thing that did pissed me off is just how they're both kind of inconsiderate of each other's situation?
The top knew that Hye-on was in some kind of shady business, but this kid just can't sit still. And Hey-on knew that the top love him so much, but he just keep ignoring the dude's feelings,,,
I do wish we at least could've seen Kaz's wife, even a single panel of them smiling at each other happily at their wedding would've been enough!
And also there were a lot of plot that weren't properly finished off. What happened to the miyamura gang, the drug business, the cop dude? Why did the cops entered the scene and arrested Hye-on despite saying "let it go"?
Despite all the bravado and scary image the author built around Renge, he didn't even lasted an hour in he fight! He died kind of pathetically, too. For a gang that's competing with a large yakuza, I expected more people and more action scenes. Renge fighting with a sword surrounded by guns would've been cool asf.
I felt like the author had a clear purpose for each character, but failed to expand and maximize them. The cop dude was basically thrown away after that call with the top, and Kaz was just brought up again when the author needed a reason for the main characters to return to Japan.
And also i cant help but feel a bit uncomfortable in the scene where Hye-on treated the top as a whore. I feel like the author only put that in the story so they can have sex?
Overall it had a nice decent plot, the characters felt a little bit too shallow and feels like they're following a stereotype when making an action, the relationship between the main characters were sweet! But the story definitely could have developed a bit more, be more intense and angsty.! ^^
It was an okay read! But one thing that did pissed me off is just how they're both kind of inconsiderate of each other's situation?
The top knew that Hye-on was in some kind of shady business, but this kid just can't sit still. And Hey-on knew that the top love him so much, but he just keep ignoring the dude's feelings,,,
I do wish we at least could've seen Kaz's wife, even a single panel of them smiling at each other happily at their wedding would've been enough!
And also there were a lot of plot that weren't properly finished off. What happened to the miyamura gang, the drug business, the cop dude? Why did the cops entered the scene and arrested Hye-on despite saying "let it go"?
Despite all the bravado and scary image the author built around Renge, he didn't even lasted an hour in he fight! He died kind of pathetically, too. For a gang that's competing with a large yakuza, I expected more people and more action scenes. Renge fighting with a sword surrounded by guns would've been cool asf.
I felt like the author had a clear purpose for each character, but failed to expand and maximize them. The cop dude was basically thrown away after that call with the top, and Kaz was just brought up again when the author needed a reason for the main characters to return to Japan.
And also i cant help but feel a bit uncomfortable in the scene where Hye-on treated the top as a whore. I feel like the author only put that in the story so they can have sex?
Overall it had a nice decent plot, the characters felt a little bit too shallow and feels like they're following a stereotype when making an action, the relationship between the main characters were sweet! But the story definitely could have developed a bit more, be more intense and angsty.! ^^