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Good potential, bad writing

Jelicka August 31, 2026 1:20 pm

Average story. It lacks of deepness. Alpha has a serious problem with consent. Let's be honest, some sex scenes are basically rape. Omega doesn't have communication skills and condones alpha egoist behaviour. The plot is weirdly built. Overall, the story had potential but, sigh, I didn't manage to really enjoy it.

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    this venerable one August 31, 2026 3:05 pm

    those who gave you dislikes are weird. you are definitely telling the truth. i don't mind dark romance but the case in this story, the noncons and dubcons are never addressed and it is so frustrating i hated it. it also did not happen one time (not that it really matters) but most of the explicit scenes are either a dubcon or a straight up noncon