Where's the conflict and the climax to mc realising his feelings for ml? Please don't tell me the rape was the "conflict". It's funny how nothing has changed but all of a sudden all the things that were holding mc back is not affecting him anymore? He just wakes up one day and decides to get pregnant? Like not even a chapter to show us how mc realised his feelings? Him masturbating to ml's shirt cannot be the yearning oh lord. Like something feels so empty.
Where's the conflict and the climax to mc realising his feelings for ml? Please don't tell me the rape was the "conflict". It's funny how nothing has changed but all of a sudden all the things that were holding mc back is not affecting him anymore? He just wakes up one day and decides to get pregnant? Like not even a chapter to show us how mc realised his feelings? Him masturbating to ml's shirt cannot be the yearning oh lord. Like something feels so empty.