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It's rare to come across a story that's too long

Crewefie September 2, 2026 12:57 am

Up until somewhere around chapter 80 it was great, (though i nearly instantly dropped it at their first meeting, but im glad i didn't) and even with everything that was still left to uncover, I feel like 20 chapters max would be all you needed to tie this off with a perfect little bow, but suddenly after 80 it started to drag on. Maybe it was just me, and I'm fine with this being just a difference in preference, but I feel like so much was added or introduced after chapter 80ish that was just not needed and bloated the story. We started dwelling on things I really didn't care about. Like the little boy? He didn't need any of that back story he had he really didn't. Neither did the other green guy or demon girl. But again, that might just be me. Either way, I'd lost interest by chapter 110, maybe I'll come back to finish this in the future. 6.5/10

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