its obvious this isnt just some regular save the background charac bc theyre my fav and trying not to go to the route of death. BUT theres too many things to take into account everything is getting thrown at once and its hard to keep up (if ur someone that invests in storybuilding and not just the romance plot) is she a saint/priest? she owns two of the most infamous guilds as well as an assassination one and SOMEHOW in the og it was NEVER mentioned? girl what. it’s clear the og villainess was hella capable and had a broader goal and picture besides some measly romance with a man. but then the priest, did he go back in time? was he reincarnated. how come it took him less than 2 chaps of us being introduce to the person he looks up to, to realise it was the villainess herself. ALSO when you own 2 infamous guilds wouldnt your subordinates start suspecting why you arent active in the business activities and then theres the mana, AT LEAST TELL US HOW THE MANA system works in this world, hmm yes if u use magic mana goes omnom on your heart and you die. okay. what? thank god i read OP reincarnation action manhwa slop cause to a person who probs arent aware of magic/xp/mana systems they wouldve been hella confuse. its like this story is acting like theres more than meets the eye then serves the most shallowest cliche storyline. dont get me wrong i still enjoy reading this but oh my god why are we getting thrown 100000 at once. i like have a love-dislike relationship w the FL its clear she’s capable on a business aspect but i also wish she regained memories of the og FL/villainess because she clearly was a head born leader. now she’s just reduce to an obsess fan, fanning over her fave. ughhhhhhhh maybe the pacing would make sense once the entire series is completed. but ugh idk i still stand by my point too many plotholes the characters are shallow and somehow all the chars just accept whatever change is happening. im just gonna stick around and see the reaction when she finds out the duke is dyin and shi and how he gets cured
its obvious this isnt just some regular save the background charac bc theyre my fav and trying not to go to the route of death.
BUT theres too many things to take into account everything is getting thrown at once and its hard to keep up (if ur someone that invests in storybuilding and not just the romance plot)
is she a saint/priest? she owns two of the most infamous guilds as well as an assassination one and SOMEHOW in the og it was NEVER mentioned? girl what. it’s clear the og villainess was hella capable and had a broader goal and picture besides some measly romance with a man. but then the priest, did he go back in time? was he reincarnated. how come it took him less than 2 chaps of us being introduce to the person he looks up to, to realise it was the villainess herself.
ALSO when you own 2 infamous guilds wouldnt your subordinates start suspecting why you arent active in the business activities
and then theres the mana, AT LEAST TELL US HOW THE MANA system works in this world, hmm yes if u use magic mana goes omnom on your heart and you die. okay. what?
thank god i read OP reincarnation action manhwa slop cause to a person who probs arent aware of magic/xp/mana systems they wouldve been hella confuse.
its like this story is acting like theres more than meets the eye then serves the most shallowest cliche storyline.
dont get me wrong i still enjoy reading this but oh my god why are we getting thrown 100000 at once.
i like have a love-dislike relationship w the FL its clear she’s capable on a business aspect but i also wish she regained memories of the og FL/villainess because she clearly was a head born leader. now she’s just reduce to an obsess fan, fanning over her fave.
ughhhhhhhh maybe the pacing would make sense once the entire series is completed. but ugh idk i still stand by my point
too many plotholes
the characters are shallow and somehow all the chars just accept whatever change is happening.
im just gonna stick around and see the reaction when she finds out the duke is dyin and shi and how he gets cured