I really love this story but the ending? I feel like more closure and a bit of a continuation of their story is nice especially with the level of world building and dimension we were fed. We don’t close on his dad, we didn’t really get closure on their arguments and such (I like you? That’s it?) like everything else in this story was dragged out except the ending and then we just jumped into side stories..? I’m a bit disappointed cuz I feel like that’s pretty lacking because the main story matters the most so the audience cares enough to read the side stories… what is ml going to do for work now? What happened to blonde? Brother? Did grandma die? What was the family relationships? Mc mom? Ml family? My days. Like if ur gonna develop side characters might as well incorporate them a little bit… I honestly would have to give her a 7/10 cuz of it but maybe I just don’t get nonverbal communication in general. But I do love stories that can give us a well rounded plot in all forms not just the main couple.. but then we also lacked on the main couple. Oh well I should write my own shi or be the dude who reviews I forgot before publish lol
I really love this story but the ending? I feel like more closure and a bit of a continuation of their story is nice especially with the level of world building and dimension we were fed. We don’t close on his dad, we didn’t really get closure on their arguments and such (I like you? That’s it?) like everything else in this story was dragged out except the ending and then we just jumped into side stories..? I’m a bit disappointed cuz I feel like that’s pretty lacking because the main story matters the most so the audience cares enough to read the side stories… what is ml going to do for work now? What happened to blonde? Brother? Did grandma die? What was the family relationships? Mc mom? Ml family? My days. Like if ur gonna develop side characters might as well incorporate them a little bit… I honestly would have to give her a 7/10 cuz of it but maybe I just don’t get nonverbal communication in general. But I do love stories that can give us a well rounded plot in all forms not just the main couple.. but then we also lacked on the main couple. Oh well I should write my own shi or be the dude who reviews I forgot before publish lol