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Pacing is kinda off

professionalsimp September 7, 2026 12:11 am

Plot is pretty good and I could easily follow the story but suddenly we have a weird gap from ch 22 to 23 in which the leads are suddenly together, talking about them having confessed to each other, having snu etc but it was never shown any of that? Idk, it felt like a chapter or 2 were missing
It's also weird how ml felt guilty once about being with mc while thinking he was his father's killer, I would have died inside.... but then in the last chapters he finds out he wasn't the killer but he still doesn't say anything to mc when he confronts him with the case files
Overall it was a nice story, ending was a bit rushed but it was refreshing to see ml going to prison, as in most stories they just avoid that kind of thing bc of plot armor

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