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So so, 6/10, an ok read to pass time, but I didn't really enjoy the story. It is lacking i...

Mango Juice September 7, 2026 2:23 am

So so, 6/10, an ok read to pass time, but I didn't really enjoy the story. It is lacking in so many details, there are storylines that should have been answered from the start, example how many years exactly have passed since the emperor tried to conquer the white Tundra and how long since mc have lived for him to become the legend ashen barbarian in the history, it is said at the first chapter that the empire lost, but then the empire still exists. It wasn't even until many chapters that it is said that there are other barbarians outside of Tundra, so I was really confused because the story made it seem like barbarians are specifically only in the Tundra, also the story should have shown the other barbarians in the Tundra aside from the two others for an effective world building. We don't even know how big the Tundra, not even in passing, because the storyboard and the panelling didn't really do a good job, because in the chapters where Ketal met the mercenaries and the merchant girl, it seems like they just walk through the terrains then voila they're at the destination.

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