I started reading this because it was the name universe, but this one is just so badly written. Had he told him the name was there from the start, it could have been a good story. And don’t say “oh, that’s his personality” that’s bad writing. Him dating some guy just because he wanted experience is also so out of character for him. Sometimes a story doesn’t need to be dragged out.
I started reading this because it was the name universe, but this one is just so badly written. Had he told him the name was there from the start, it could have been a good story. And don’t say “oh, that’s his personality” that’s bad writing. Him dating some guy just because he wanted experience is also so out of character for him. Sometimes a story doesn’t need to be dragged out.