i don't think the story telling is good. the comedy and their dynamic is great tho.
i mean a mystery don't need to be too mysterious. cheongdo himself seemed to still withhold information not said to chanran, our main perspective. and chanran was busy doing those household tasks instead of investigating properly and he always dismiss those supernatural stuff which actually important clues.
so what does author intend to do? ok maybe this isn't a detective story, but these two main characters need a tangible direction after 30 chapters, it's a crime not to have one. chanran still in the investigation phase and cheongdo just lounging (in plot) watching how sexy chanran is (relatable tho).
i just have a feeling the reveal gonna be anticlimactic. i mean it's already obvious who is the villains here right? so they actually only need to find the elders weakness so they can negotiate or something. it's actually pretty clear in shamanic clan like these, there are bound to be corruption and people in politic who don't want their name to go out there for using shaman to curse their political enemies or something, they just need to find the name list and threaten them, or find evidences of the clan evil plan and sold them out to their clients who may be get scammed by them. That will solve their problem if they only want cheongdo to be free. they don't even need to know what happen to grandma or those birds or those corpse walking at night at this rate. i mean if the clan stop doing something whatever cheongdo is, he's not going to suffer their backlash of their evil deed. so that's why i think it was made too mysterious and aren't in the right direction yet
i don't think the story telling is good. the comedy and their dynamic is great tho.
i mean a mystery don't need to be too mysterious. cheongdo himself seemed to still withhold information not said to chanran, our main perspective. and chanran was busy doing those household tasks instead of investigating properly and he always dismiss those supernatural stuff which actually important clues.
so what does author intend to do? ok maybe this isn't a detective story, but these two main characters need a tangible direction after 30 chapters, it's a crime not to have one.
chanran still in the investigation phase and cheongdo just lounging (in plot) watching how sexy chanran is (relatable tho).
i just have a feeling the reveal gonna be anticlimactic. i mean it's already obvious who is the villains here right? so they actually only need to find the elders weakness so they can negotiate or something. it's actually pretty clear in shamanic clan like these, there are bound to be corruption and people in politic who don't want their name to go out there for using shaman to curse their political enemies or something, they just need to find the name list and threaten them, or find evidences of the clan evil plan and sold them out to their clients who may be get scammed by them. That will solve their problem if they only want cheongdo to be free. they don't even need to know what happen to grandma or those birds or those corpse walking at night at this rate. i mean if the clan stop doing something whatever cheongdo is, he's not going to suffer their backlash of their evil deed. so that's why i think it was made too mysterious and aren't in the right direction yet