This story has so much potential imo. But the fl, maybe because she's not serious at all, she makes the flow of the story somehow awful to read. Like When Damon tried to explain things in serious tone, she will goes are you alright? Are you sick? And all doing unnecessary clingy at the wrong moment. That's what I get from the scene. Can't help seeing her as a shitty Chara despite her resolution to not too clingy to Damon so she can let him go, back to his own story. Hmph.. I don't really care about her background anymore after looking at the development. Drop this
This story has so much potential imo. But the fl, maybe because she's not serious at all, she makes the flow of the story somehow awful to read. Like When Damon tried to explain things in serious tone, she will goes are you alright? Are you sick? And all doing unnecessary clingy at the wrong moment. That's what I get from the scene. Can't help seeing her as a shitty Chara despite her resolution to not too clingy to Damon so she can let him go, back to his own story. Hmph.. I don't really care about her background anymore after looking at the development. Drop this