It's kinda engaging story, couple is both capable but I wasn't engaged much because the political side of it all was messy(negative) like there's a lot going on. The plan of revenge was straightforward yet messy. It was not the revenge story I was looking for. As for the couple, Terryl was too reactive and inconsistent Idk her background justify it all and how she dealt with it in the sidestory was nice but her character felt lacking for someone who's strong and from a powerful household. Her papa is hot AF tho. Cesio was not to my liking, I already found him bland looking but he was a diva but then again he was pathetic. Same as Terryl, his background justify or explains his personality but masking his lack of trust as him being anxious was not it. That overthrowing stuff they did was such a flop I'd say, it was not well executed.
There's a lot fo lacking in this story, the use of Baron Winterglass was never shown, the bigger curse that Duke Taritar was planning was forgotten as well. As one of the commetor said it was all over the place. Wouldn't read it again, wouldn't recommend. I was actually hoping for pettiness in this story bcs her revenging on her ex was the petty I like but it turned out to focus on the politics side which didn't deliver well so yeah. Read at your own risk.
It's kinda engaging story, couple is both capable but I wasn't engaged much because the political side of it all was messy(negative) like there's a lot going on. The plan of revenge was straightforward yet messy. It was not the revenge story I was looking for.
As for the couple, Terryl was too reactive and inconsistent Idk her background justify it all and how she dealt with it in the sidestory was nice but her character felt lacking for someone who's strong and from a powerful household. Her papa is hot AF tho.
Cesio was not to my liking, I already found him bland looking but he was a diva but then again he was pathetic. Same as Terryl, his background justify or explains his personality but masking his lack of trust as him being anxious was not it. That overthrowing stuff they did was such a flop I'd say, it was not well executed.
There's a lot fo lacking in this story, the use of Baron Winterglass was never shown, the bigger curse that Duke Taritar was planning was forgotten as well. As one of the commetor said it was all over the place. Wouldn't read it again, wouldn't recommend. I was actually hoping for pettiness in this story bcs her revenging on her ex was the petty I like but it turned out to focus on the politics side which didn't deliver well so yeah. Read at your own risk.