I first read thus as a teen and I really loved it and wanted them to be together forever, but now that I'm older I'm seeing a pattern and I don't hold the same sentiment.
When they broke up and when he went to New York, I think they either should've stayed broken up or had dated other people during that time. I've noticed, even outside of yaoi, the romance genre loves keeping first loves together. While I love it and think it's super cute, I am dying to just see an actual romance where there's more than one partner. And that when they are in another relationship, they are still in love with their previous partner.
Honestly, I love the story as is, but as a previous comment said, the plot and storyline is getting repetitive. I think it wouldve been cool had the author explored the break up more and had them have other partners. Anyway, they can serve this plot line to me for centuries and I would gobble it up everytime.
I first read thus as a teen and I really loved it and wanted them to be together forever, but now that I'm older I'm seeing a pattern and I don't hold the same sentiment.
When they broke up and when he went to New York, I think they either should've stayed broken up or had dated other people during that time. I've noticed, even outside of yaoi, the romance genre loves keeping first loves together. While I love it and think it's super cute, I am dying to just see an actual romance where there's more than one partner. And that when they are in another relationship, they are still in love with their previous partner.
Honestly, I love the story as is, but as a previous comment said, the plot and storyline is getting repetitive. I think it wouldve been cool had the author explored the break up more and had them have other partners. Anyway, they can serve this plot line to me for centuries and I would gobble it up everytime.