i’m on chap. 16 and it doesn’t feel like the characters know what kind of plot or setting they’re in you’re a kidnapper but a puppy top ? and why exactly are we having a chat over a glass of wine it just doesn’t make any sense forget the trope please and just dive into your characters jesus christ these people are not writers
i’m on chap. 16 and it doesn’t feel like the characters know what kind of plot or setting they’re in you’re a kidnapper but a puppy top ? and why exactly are we having a chat over a glass of wine it just doesn’t make any sense forget the trope please and just dive into your characters jesus christ these people are not writers