I kinda like the story, but I have so many issues with the ML (and others) in it.
1. Your wife goes to an interview and disappears. You can't locate her for days and when you do find her and she doesn't remember the date -- you just yell at her and not investigate it??
2. FL returns home with a serious mark on her wrist, husband doesn't notice it, but the maids and doctor should have and none of them decide to inform their master about it??
3. FL is sent to a monastery. Accompanying servants see the condition of the room she is to live in and none of them report back to their master about it?? They just keep quiet?? Allowing the FL to get sick and almost die. Great. -_-
4. ML and FL divorce. But ML despite being drunk doesn't even think over the reason the divorce was brought up?? Not even the next day when he was sober?? He's not concerned at all??
5. Andrei -- who are you really?? You leave your cushy job working at the mansion to work at a start-up company that may or may not succeed?? Plus explain your strength and athleticism which is unheard of for someone who was a bookkeeping steward. Are you a spy??
6. Spying -- why does the ML seem to be keeping tabs on his ex-wife that he shows up at all the places she is at or going to be at?? If he doesn't trust her or believe her why is he still involving himself in her life?? From his own admission he didn't really love her.
7. Trust -- ML doesn't trust or believe her story about her missing memory, but he's witnessed her memory issues multiple times and he STILL doesn't think it's worth investigating what really happened during her royal interview!!
I have a few more gripes, but those are my main ones. This ML is useless. Completely useless and I'm glad that FL divorced him. (Anyhoo, Isaac, you need a wife and I shall volunteer to be it. ^_^ )
I kinda like the story, but I have so many issues with the ML (and others) in it.
1. Your wife goes to an interview and disappears. You can't locate her for days and when you do find her and she doesn't remember the date -- you just yell at her and not investigate it??
2. FL returns home with a serious mark on her wrist, husband doesn't notice it, but the maids and doctor should have and none of them decide to inform their master about it??
3. FL is sent to a monastery. Accompanying servants see the condition of the room she is to live in and none of them report back to their master about it?? They just keep quiet?? Allowing the FL to get sick and almost die. Great. -_-
4. ML and FL divorce. But ML despite being drunk doesn't even think over the reason the divorce was brought up?? Not even the next day when he was sober?? He's not concerned at all??
5. Andrei -- who are you really?? You leave your cushy job working at the mansion to work at a start-up company that may or may not succeed?? Plus explain your strength and athleticism which is unheard of for someone who was a bookkeeping steward. Are you a spy??
6. Spying -- why does the ML seem to be keeping tabs on his ex-wife that he shows up at all the places she is at or going to be at?? If he doesn't trust her or believe her why is he still involving himself in her life?? From his own admission he didn't really love her.
7. Trust -- ML doesn't trust or believe her story about her missing memory, but he's witnessed her memory issues multiple times and he STILL doesn't think it's worth investigating what really happened during her royal interview!!
I have a few more gripes, but those are my main ones. This ML is useless. Completely useless and I'm glad that FL divorced him. (Anyhoo, Isaac, you need a wife and I shall volunteer to be it. ^_^ )