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Major pacing issue

MoonShine September 10, 2026 9:10 pm

The story itself wasn't bad and I think I would have enjoyed it way better if the pacing was a bit slow and story development was more fleshed out. While reading it felt like I was reading in a 2x/3x speed. It was so fast paced that honestly I wasn't convinced that the ml actually have feelings for the FL. I think there childhood part was portrayed with a perfect pace. Once then got older the speed just went to light speed. So I couldn't connect with the romantic part or the "obsessive" part of this story. Throughout the whole story I just felt bad for the FL. This girl just couldn't catch a break in her whole life.

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