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Reached chapter 70 and cannot continue. The art is great! Except for inconsistent lightin...

Bluepiano September 11, 2026 4:05 am

Reached chapter 70 and cannot continue.

The art is great! Except for inconsistent lighting at ballroom scenes where it's supposed to be night outside but from the inside of the ballroom the windows look bright as day (but this is a very niche complaint and I don't see it bothering other people.)

The story was not exciting. Anything that could have been a challenge (having to find the memories by herself, figuring out the exact nature of her relationship with her maternal family, starting to gain assets for her independence in a meaningful way) was stripped from the very beginning so she didn't have to do anything that would stray from collecting "her beauties", which resulted in her doing absolutely nothing of substance. The ML's fell fast and with little build up. If the romance was going to be the thing that carried the story, it flopped. One of the things that bothered me the most was her cluelessness to how her "terminal illness" was affecting other people emotionally. It is understandable for her to be more chill about it since she knows she is not going to die, but to see other people in distress over it and just go " I don't get why they're sad," made her look dumb and emotionally unintelligent.

Final Rating:
I would have liked to rate it higher for the art (the outfits are crisp

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