I feel like this had a lot of potential but really needed a talented editor to keep it on ...

I feel like this had a lot of potential but really needed a talented editor to keep it on track because it has such an interesting premise but kind of foregoes all of the things that make it interesting in order to just devolve into tropes that are kind of (extremely) juvenile. I’d like to hear more through the internal monologue about the switched top/bottom dynamic or the transmigration itself but I just don’t think I can keep going to read through the slog of boring love triangles and off putting jealousy to try to imagine it myself