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I really like the art, but the way the story progressed was a bit disappointing. The conce...

cherryapplemode September 12, 2026 2:21 am

I really like the art, but the way the story progressed was a bit disappointing. The concept was good, but the writing is not that great. The transitions from murders to normal days wasn't smooth at all. In one panel they're all serious and the next it's a normal day. I do like the tension between the main characters though, but yeah just like what everyone is saying it felt so rushed. 4/10 read

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