First, I'm actually personally glad it was fast paced because that would of hurt even more to read.
Lots of plot holes though because of this speed. This author could definitely cook up a good story if they improved on their pacing. There would be more space to further develop the profile of the characters.
We never got any specifics on that old chairman and what he did, but that could of been a choice on purpose which I respect. It wss already so saddening to see. The whole Nagi and Song history isn't touched on well enough. Hosu? Hosu's past and cgaracter should've had more details and background. He brings up how his dad told him his weird nausea made him weak, and that he couldn't believe what his father had done,,, but the author doesn't really explore that. I think Sohu got the least amount of writing, all he felt like was just a male lead, not much else. Nagi's character development seemed too quick, more like a flip of a switch. Another thing, Nagi would become a victim, but then move on from it quickly. I can see this because he's dealt with worse, but I also dont think it would've been in the way the author showed. Him becoming more of a "husk" would make more sense. Someone who has just given up.
Lowk, this was some Disney movie ending
There was an idea of a story, but the author poorly executed it. I wonder if anyone even reviewed this story before it was put into production, and i wonder if there was even a plan on how to tell the story. I was definitely invested, but Jesus that writing was terrible lol. I hope someone around this author can actually help them improve and later produce something better.
First, I'm actually personally glad it was fast paced because that would of hurt even more to read.
Lots of plot holes though because of this speed. This author could definitely cook up a good story if they improved on their pacing. There would be more space to further develop the profile of the characters.
We never got any specifics on that old chairman and what he did, but that could of been a choice on purpose which I respect. It wss already so saddening to see. The whole Nagi and Song history isn't touched on well enough. Hosu? Hosu's past and cgaracter should've had more details and background. He brings up how his dad told him his weird nausea made him weak, and that he couldn't believe what his father had done,,, but the author doesn't really explore that. I think Sohu got the least amount of writing, all he felt like was just a male lead, not much else. Nagi's character development seemed too quick, more like a flip of a switch. Another thing, Nagi would become a victim, but then move on from it quickly. I can see this because he's dealt with worse, but I also dont think it would've been in the way the author showed. Him becoming more of a "husk" would make more sense. Someone who has just given up.
Lowk, this was some Disney movie ending
There was an idea of a story, but the author poorly executed it. I wonder if anyone even reviewed this story before it was put into production, and i wonder if there was even a plan on how to tell the story. I was definitely invested, but Jesus that writing was terrible lol. I hope someone around this author can actually help them improve and later produce something better.