The stoty is fine. The only thing I want to point out is at the last chap he can clearly see her from where his standing it's on his line of sight the divider or whatever that's called have like a window, and I can't stop myself from laughing and thinking wtf you can clearly see her, anyway that's all.
The stoty is fine. The only thing I want to point out is at the last chap he can clearly see her from where his standing it's on his line of sight the divider or whatever that's called have like a window, and I can't stop myself from laughing and thinking wtf you can clearly see her, anyway that's all.