the story is poorly writen.
First it make no sens for the prince to give FL to ML just in case her name would appear on him and keeping him alive but taking her back way before a year had past. Suddenly Ml surviving is no longer important so what was the point of giving her to begin with.
No real motive behind the mean guy. He is a bad guy only to be a bad guy. So he do bad things and here you go.
No real deep feeling, either about the trauma, the pain, the love, the happiness, the obsession it is so poorly writen it s just "step 1 step 2 step 3" without any real development around it. For example ML "oh now I have feeling for her and I want her" oki? Where does that came from? You need to complete that information by yourself, is it because he pitty her because he grew attach to her, because he want to protect her out of sympathy, because he does fall for her charm, because he f** and she s hot? For every emotions there is you don t get any progression just "now it s like that".
I would agree Ml isn t a cheater he was fiance and it was an arrange marriage he wasn t interested in her and the fiance knew about it, at this point they just didn t breakup for political issue, but again if we could have an actual story around it not just adding the fiance as another weak plot just to do wrong and confuse fl like a bad cliché and once its done it s like it was never there to begin with!
The story is bad so people will be bashing on every lil thing they get they probably, for the majority, doesn t get why they doesn t like the story but still don t like it, so the perception of that story his on the negative side. When you don t like someone you ll start to search for every reason you can to keep on disliking them this is what happen with that story.
A lot of people just drop it on the run I did thought about it sooo many time but at this point I was thinking next chapter is probably the last one how could they extend that story. Every chapter since the prince is dead but sadly the story just don t want to end...
If you like it seriously that s good I am happy you can enjoy a story! But seriously don t be angry with us.. normaly in a comment section at the end of september I wouldn t be able to find a comment I wrote on june and may on the first page. The comments you are seeing are from long long ago or from people who couldn t go far in the story before they dropped it.
I actually understand what you mean, and thank you for taking the time to explain your points in detail! I can definitely see where you’re coming from, especially with some of the things you mentioned about the character development and certain plot points feeling like they were just added and then forgotten.
I think I just read stories a little differently. I’ve been reading for such a long time that I don’t always analyze every single detail or question whether every plot point makes perfect sense. I usually just go along with the story, enjoy the characters and the overall experience, and try not to overthink it too much. :)
Of course, there are things that don’t make complete sense to me either, but they usually don’t bother me enough to stop enjoying the story. I can understand why those things would be frustrating for someone who pays more attention to the writing, character development, and consistency.
So I totally get why you and other people don’t like the story. I just happen to enjoy it despite its flaws. And honestly, I appreciate you explaining your perspective instead of just saying “the story is bad” without elaborating.
I guess we just have very different ways of reading and enjoying stories, and that’s completely fine! ;)
indeed, I wish you a good time with that story <3
This whole comment section is making me SO angry. Like, is this y’all’s first time ever reading a story like this, or are people really just THIS clueless???
IT’S A NAMEVERSE. The whole point of this universe is that the two people literally have each other’s names on their bodies. THAT is the concept. So why are y’all acting shocked or confused by things that are literally part of the whole Nameverse setting??? Please read the story before complaining about something that’s been explained by the plot.
And honestly, the story itself is NOT even bad. I read all the way to chapter 54 and yeah, there is violence, but that doesn’t automatically make the story bad??? I actually think the story is pretty interesting, and I liked the ending too.
And the ML??? He’s a GREEN FLAG to me. Just because some people think he “cheater” doesn’t mean he suddenly became a red flag. Y’all seriously need to read further before judging his character. Especially with the arranged marriage situation, his actions actually make sense when you understand the story and his character development.
The ONLY thing I genuinely hate is the censorship. Like WHY did they censor so many chapters??? If this is supposed to be a mature story, then LET IT BE MATURE. What’s the point of censoring half the damn story
Anyway, actually READ the story before coming into the comments acting confused about things that are literally not true. I did start top read the comments and did we even read the same story...lmao