Our MC is a little frustrating with his super logical thinking because he is not following a logical though process.
When the ML approached the MC he made it clear he was pursuing him, this is explained to our MC later who then still is like nah cant be. So ML switches to tellingbMC, I'm pursuing you for the babys sake and now MC is spiraling because he thinks ML would never like him without the baby. It feels less like a misunderstanding and more like he just made up this problem for himself.
All im saying is, I love both characters and the doc lol, but I wish MC was tweaked a bit so that his social ineptitude was just part of his character and NOT the only thing pushing and building the plot. Because its used to build the plot, the author has to make him be dumb at certain times and smart the next. All in all, its a good /fun story but with a few changes and it'd be amazing!
Our MC is a little frustrating with his super logical thinking because he is not following a logical though process.
When the ML approached the MC he made it clear he was pursuing him, this is explained to our MC later who then still is like nah cant be. So ML switches to tellingbMC, I'm pursuing you for the babys sake and now MC is spiraling because he thinks ML would never like him without the baby. It feels less like a misunderstanding and more like he just made up this problem for himself.
All im saying is, I love both characters and the doc lol, but I wish MC was tweaked a bit so that his social ineptitude was just part of his character and NOT the only thing pushing and building the plot. Because its used to build the plot, the author has to make him be dumb at certain times and smart the next. All in all, its a good /fun story but with a few changes and it'd be amazing!