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Too long

Valkyrie September 19, 2026 10:05 pm

Too long for this kind of story, skimmed through chps 70 -95.
Saein basically has no personality, well, understandable considering he grew up in a medical facility...but that makes me ask a question, how did they fall in love with each other? I like a consistency and logic in any fictional storytelling...this story maybe gave trauma bonding at best.

Anatomy was off for most parts and kids looked like adults with small body. That being said, I liked how everyone had wonky face beside our two leads

I also liked the worldbuilding in this omegaverse, love when authors bring something original to this genre.


Saein revenge was so ridiculous and cringe...it gave a child who tries to escape home while bringing only a banana , few meters from home thinking how they screwed everyone up now

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