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Decent read but…

Joah September 20, 2026 11:03 pm

As some people said, the story was decently good but the plot felt lacking. There were so many things that didn’t make sense.
Both of them were so so powerfull, but somehow they get caught and played around by the emperor, who mind you is just a simple human.
Valeta always tried to hide she was a elementalist but what for? The elementals felt like a convenient way for her to escape situations she didn’t have much control, but then they would get forgotten. I still don’t understand why she was trying all the time to hide she was an elemental lol, but then she would easily used them as if nothing. Also, the fact that the elementals would just obey to her without forming a contract, when it was explicitly said all the time that it was so rare for elementals to help someone who doesn’t form a contract with them. It’s like everything worked conveniently for her (which makes sense since she is the mc ig).
Also, there were some things that were mentioned but never explained. The concept of being a transcendent was mentioned once in the main story but never explained. It was then brought up again in the sides and only then they gave us the concept of what it meant.
Also, the dreams she would have?
And someone also said this before but I totally agree with it: her being a transmigrator had no effect in the story. The only thing she did with that was not getting attached with the people of the manor and trying to push rein away because she knew he was gonna kill them all. Asides from that, it had no effect in the story. It would have been better if it was just a normal character that suffered from her dad abuse and that’s why she didn’t get close to anyone and that’s it. But well, I guess not all the time the fl has to do something with the information she has from the novel.
Either way, if you ignore all this, it’s a pretty good story. I read it completely and all the sides as well. It’s pretty decent if you ignore the plot lacking and making no sense most of the time times.

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