I genuinely think it's a good compelling story, and I really enjoyed myself reading it.. but the whole story is just hastily closed off in the last chapter?! It had so much potential and their was so much they could've done after finally getting together. The end really ruined things.
We could've had a they are finally together phase, finally a real loving marriage, their own children, then seeing the dynamic of first child and the new child(ren), and just seeing how their dynamic would develop over time. It's such a waste of potential..
I genuinely think it's a good compelling story, and I really enjoyed myself reading it.. but the whole story is just hastily closed off in the last chapter?! It had so much potential and their was so much they could've done after finally getting together. The end really ruined things.
We could've had a they are finally together phase, finally a real loving marriage, their own children, then seeing the dynamic of first child and the new child(ren), and just seeing how their dynamic would develop over time. It's such a waste of potential..