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This story is all over the place but there’s a fatal flaw that I can’t forgive

Arcticwx September 22, 2026 5:38 am

It’s a convoluted love triangle and that’s obviously early on. But it’s not poly. Spoiler, Joon does end up picking just one guy. The problem is that the final smut scene of the story is not with the guy he chooses. In fact, I think we actually get more smut with that pairing than we do with the final pairing. Why is that? Add to that the fact that those scenes are all dubcon and it’s just a huge disappointment. I will say though, there is entertainment to be had here simply because not a single character is in their right mind. They’re all insane, some more than others, some WAY more than others. So don’t write it off fully if you can tolerate its negative aspects because the escalation into pure chaos is definitely memorable.

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