Dude only 9 chapters are out we have barely seen how the story develops. Just let it marinate
We are at chap 9 not ninety.
What kind of "improvement" do you want, when we don't even know everybody
9 chapters in and the story is going no where let it go
You need 90 chapters to get improvements are you slow? By chapter 9 you expect the constant same outcome. Are you a person of insanity who likes repetition? A story shouldn’t be on the same loop for 9 chapters that’s bs writing
You’ve probably never read a slow burn and that’s okay. Stick to fast paced stories so you don’t get frustrated
Slow burns aren’t repetitive. Imagine reading the same chapter 9 times. You’re confusing slow burn with repetition. Maybe read different genres to help yourself become comprehensive
Some start off being slightly repetitive but if that’s not what you like you don’t gotta read lol obviously these characters still have a long way to go
Slightly isn’t 9 chapters and shouldn’t you take the same with my comment. If you don’t like my opinion you don’t need to keep speaking
It doesn’t take 9 chapters of the same outcome to figure out what changes a character needs. That’s just bad writing.
Chill out I’m not trying to hate on you lmfao I just answered so new readers don’t misjudge the story before reading
Don’t you think once again you should take your own advice you’re not fact finder there’s others who don’t like this work. If they don’t agree with you lack of proper judgement it doesn’t mean they’re wrong. You’re not answering a question because there wasn’t one you just don’t like my opinion bc it doesn’t match yours. That’s not misjudgments it’s opinions something your brain is missing . Your opinion isn’t a fact just bc you like it. I don’t that’s it
Maybe chill out of my comment no one is forcing you to be here the writing is bad. Others will realize along with the ratings going down . Who gets all defensive over an opinion you’re acting like you’re the writer
It’s kind of pathetic. The writer makes the omega look like an arrogant dick who likes stereotyping and taking advantage of others for his own gain. And the alpha just looks desperate. I haven’t really seen improvement for any of them. It’s like a constant negative loop.