this take is misogynistic and homophobic. yeah to each their own
Okay sure...me saying this story overcomplicates things and the FL being unlikeable means I'm being against women and gays... As a female who isn't even straight, I hate females and gay people. God forbid I just don't like stereotypical stories with poor execution. But think whatever you want. You are right.
yes indeed i am. "It's like a yaoi fangirl meets a bottom in someone's fantasy." is weird as fuck.
The FL gives me pick me author insertquirky girl vibes, that was the first impression it gave me when typing that comment. It may be a bit harsh in hindsight, but my biggest beef is the FL being unlikeable and her dynamic with the guy in the long second paragraph I wrote.
I also read your other comment. For the record , I don't solely read bl and I don't rate yaoi slop highly but rate straight shit low. I simply dislike this FL and their drama over nothing that simple communication would've ended with the ML. Maybe my first line was harsh but read my main point in the long second paragraph. My beef is with the weird drama and FL.
i didn’t make the post about you just so you know, but since a lot of people have been badmouthing the story, i felt like sharing my opinion too.
anyway, i only replied to you because of the first line you said, it’s realllly strange and it sorta shocked me.
the ML is way more annoying than the FL. i personally don’t feel like she’s a pick me, she’s the only one that makes sense in this femtop story
Ah well then sorry about that (no sarcasm intended), I had a feeling when I typed that line it would probably piss off people so I knew I had it coming. But for me, the FL came off as this author insertand really rubbed me the wrong way and I didn't like how it did the whole femdom thing with her not gaining any real power over the dude. It didn't give me bdsm but just pegging and combined with the girl's insecurities and how she was taking it out on the ML, it felt like an author insertabout femdom but not done very well. I think it's more like I had some prejudice against yaoi fangirls cause I was annoyed when I read this manga. The fandom I was in had people constantly hating on a straight ship other than when the guy was pegged and this triggered me reminding me of that. The FL felt like some girl who was only into pegging but keeps lashing out at the dude for no reason when she has her own problems to solve. Hence why I wrote that. What I really disliked was the FL and how she treated the ML and how the author needlessly put together these elements that could be done better but just comes across as out of the blue and frustrating to read. That is all. Sorry if it came across as anything else. In hindsight I should have worded it better.
Yea I don't like the guy either. Stopped reading after he kept brushing her off while she kept getting upset. I don't remember much else other than thinking how those two should just go sit at a cafe and talk it out over coffee.
For one, this doesn't really feel like femdom. It's like a yaoi fangirl meets a bottom in someone's fantasy. She overcomplicates things and he's super wishy washy, they have way bigger things to be concerned about than them sleeping together.
Lol. According to stats on the conflicting comments around 9 people like this story and 7 people dislike it. To each their own. Tbf the idea was good but the execution was terrible. I did think the guy could be a brat but the FL is unlikeable and has a chip on her shoulder to resolve and the author just isn't doing a good job going through that (seems to be swept under the table or 'resolved' too fast). While the guy doesn't listen to her insecurities and honestly I don't see her as the type of dom to control him when she's the one getting swept up at his pace and getting defensive and argumentative. It seems to be 'resolved' with her getting reflective and apologetic but it feels rushed and nothing real is getting addressed. Their argument comes out of nowhere and leaves just as quickly so there's no depth and the drama ends up overcomplicated and contrived it feels iffy and messy.
Thought it'd be fun but turned out weirdly dramatic. The author should have gone with simple smut instead of trying to add in other elements. I'm dropping this. Y'all enjoy.