I agree with everyone about the ending and after word. The FL's mother asking to be reincarnated as the FL's daughter was weird. Karzel being 3 or 4 feet taller than Reia was a little off. But Penzel boy and the FL's daughter being officially shipped was really weird to see. She looks like a 10yr old or yonger while Penzel is like 18 or something.
Other than all that I liked the story. It was simple, but still had drama and happiness. We get a happy ending and the FL and ML didn't have to forgive anyone but eachother, maybe their son counts?
What I mean by that is her real father and step mother were evil and the dukes mom was also evil, but the author didn't force forgiveness and instead they were killed for their transgressions.
The duke had the FL's father killed and she didn't feel bad for him nor angry at her husband (wow a real normal reaction in my webcomic?).
I agree with everyone about the ending and after word.
The FL's mother asking to be reincarnated as the FL's daughter was weird.
Karzel being 3 or 4 feet taller than Reia was a little off.
But Penzel boy and the FL's daughter being officially shipped was really weird to see. She looks like a 10yr old or yonger while Penzel is like 18 or something.
Other than all that I liked the story. It was simple, but still had drama and happiness. We get a happy ending and the FL and ML didn't have to forgive anyone but eachother, maybe their son counts?
What I mean by that is her real father and step mother were evil and the dukes mom was also evil, but the author didn't force forgiveness and instead they were killed for their transgressions.
The duke had the FL's father killed and she didn't feel bad for him nor angry at her husband (wow a real normal reaction in my webcomic?).