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The fact u actually added up to 100. Gotta love the dedication twin. 100% agree with u btw
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The fact u actually added up to 100. Gotta love the dedication twin. 100% agree with u btw
Dear god this is getting repetative. I honestly thought this story was gonna be a good one. Sadly i was wrong
It's mostly 30% cliffhangers with no pay off, 5% of useless side character backstory, 15% of useless inserted backstory, 5% character development, 25% of unecesary inner dialogue, 15% of smut and 5% of plot progression.
Also fuck that carrot head bastard along with the mafia boss wannabe twin
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