But I can’t get into the story. Why do you need to show detailed scenes of rape of ML and that fucking fossil? Why do you need to depict the ML ENJOYING the assault? It makes the reader confuse on what you’re trying to convey? I’m tired of seeing depictions of assault as enjoyable to the victim. Blushing? Like come the fuck on. I’m scrolling pass smut scenes so I can see how this is going to play out.
And to top it off, he’s still fucking alive. And he has fucking power. POWER!
I do like that a blue collar worker represents the majority of how fuck this situation is. And how slimy rich old bastards are deprived of anything that they go above and beyond to scratch their itch. He’s going to get what’s coming to him regardless, but we’re reading an author’s sick fetish disguised as plot.
The art is good, I’ll give the author that.
But I can’t get into the story. Why do you need to show detailed scenes of rape of ML and that fucking fossil? Why do you need to depict the ML ENJOYING the assault? It makes the reader confuse on what you’re trying to convey? I’m tired of seeing depictions of assault as enjoyable to the victim. Blushing? Like come the fuck on. I’m scrolling pass smut scenes so I can see how this is going to play out.
And to top it off, he’s still fucking alive. And he has fucking power. POWER!
I do like that a blue collar worker represents the majority of how fuck this situation is. And how slimy rich old bastards are deprived of anything that they go above and beyond to scratch their itch. He’s going to get what’s coming to him regardless, but we’re reading an author’s sick fetish disguised as plot.