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the author fumbled so badly with this

athycakes September 27, 2026 11:50 am

this story's direction is really disappointing. the moment rute got introduced as the potential ML, all of a sudden everything in the plot is thanks to him. and its making it seem like all the FL's achievements are solely due to rute, which pisses me off so much because we're essentially discrediting all the strength and power she amassed ALL BY HERSELF now that the ML arrived.

not to mention, how the author completely started to focus on rute and this relationship building, while completely foregoing essential relationships in the plot including her peers in the temple. i also super loathe how the author is starting to make out our FL to be some damsel in distress when we started out with her being some strong bombshell female lead. and all other odd decisions towards this plot's direction that just makes you wonder if the author is just fumbling this gem of a story to begin with.

idk I just had to say my piece because the story's got relatively more boring the moment we started to focus on rute, that im literally skimming through panels because the new direction feels so forced to me.

p.s. the whole stupid premature celebration when the actual villain is still on the loose is another prime example of how dumb and cliche we're getting at.

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