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caspien September 28, 2026 8:20 am

i originally started this when it was first being uploaded it, but at the time didnt really fw the art style (not bad by all means just wasnt my taste) but i came back to give it a go one more time. lthough it wasnt bad, i just seemed like a lot of the plot was unnecessary conflict to get them all to fuck, dgmw i really did like ian and jaeho, but i feel like their story was short and their fill in chapters after the whole hayeon and mathew situation just felt lackluster and kinda just.. filler like just fucking to just fuck, which i mean i guess thats to be expected.. but i was really hoping we'd have some actual tender moments with them and maybe some character development? the most we got imo was when he was proposing to ian and thats just abt it, cause we didnt get much of the raising kids portion (and i genuinely did love that i wish there was more parenting bls sigh) moving on from that i find it funny the kids hook up, keep it in the family am i right lmao brothers going after brothers (not related to each other for those who havent read dw)

other than all that, one of my only gripes is that WHERE ARE THE NIPPLES ON THE FUCKING ALPHAS it genuinely peeved me off so bad the omegas got eiffel towers for nipples but not even a single nip for the alphas? give us nipples for everybody or dont give us nipples at all ☹ nother side note, why are all the omegas in ians and jaehos family all blonde while alphas being just plain black hair... was the author affraid to mix it up... the only couple that was different was mathew and hayong, but even then they fell in to stereotypes..

all in all this story had alot of content but seemingly not really any actual plot, and ended up feeling a bit empty unfortunately, but im glad to say i finally finished this albit serveral years later lol

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    caspien September 28, 2026 8:25 am

    also this is another personal gripe, i love how the style improved throughout the story BUT IM SO MAD ITS NOT THE SAME STYLE AS THE COVER i was looking so foward to continuing this in hopes that it'd look more like the cover... no they lowk twinkified ian....