How do I say this? When I first started this story the storytelling was flowing so well that I really felt I was seeing it truly told thru yuki’s eyes but as we kept going it kinda stunted in a way where I’m confused where are we going? And I get the author is tryna focus on the side characters but I feel like that flow isn’t there anymore. We barely got a lot in the main couples storyline that I felt we just gave the ring as an excuse to do a time skip. I don’t think this story needed a time skip that long or that many. Idk maybe it’s just me though
How do I say this? When I first started this story the storytelling was flowing so well that I really felt I was seeing it truly told thru yuki’s eyes but as we kept going it kinda stunted in a way where I’m confused where are we going? And I get the author is tryna focus on the side characters but I feel like that flow isn’t there anymore. We barely got a lot in the main couples storyline that I felt we just gave the ring as an excuse to do a time skip. I don’t think this story needed a time skip that long or that many. Idk maybe it’s just me though