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What or how is this plot sloppy? I am asking out of pure curiosity because I have been able to follow along from start to present. I have read many works that were just impossible to read for the same reasons and to me, this one i can keep up with so, I would really like to know from anyone's opinion why this story has a sloppy plot. I might learn/question it more lol

The author should just pull a hiatus because the plot is sloppy since the beginning eww