I was enjoying the story but the introduction of one too many love intrests is taking away from the plot for me. They all feel so unneccesary and to me it's giving "I am the pretties and fairest in the land look all this fine men want me" This has potential but it's going down hill and so many plot holes are appearing certain stuff feels made up on the spot
I was enjoying the story but the introduction of one too many love intrests is taking away from the plot for me. They all feel so unneccesary and to me it's giving "I am the pretties and fairest in the land look all this fine men want me" This has potential but it's going down hill and so many plot holes are appearing certain stuff feels made up on the spot