Considering author said it was their first work and just how weird pacing and development, I think it comes across rapey while it was intended to be like cute romance with 2 ppl also being very much into rough bdsmish dynamic, it was just bad idea to do it together, in a short format and with no discussion at all. I think problems with like writing and developing plot and relationships are evident throughout Like MC suddenly getting feelings towards ML or suddenly realising them, and smwh ending being concerned if ML feels the same way back, while him now suddenly liking a man or FFS enjoying being talked down at and following smn commands while sex, nah, that wasn't on his mind much smwh I don't know, call me like rape defender or whtvr, but I just can see intentions of author and how it all kinda fumbled up a bit while execution really clearly Also Kangsik's face is ...oh my gawd... Low why do I suddenly want to draw it, tho I don't remember last time drawing anything? MC is very pretty too, reminded me of Join from My Master a lot. Hope the artist makes more stuff smth green flag hopefully
Considering author said it was their first work and just how weird pacing and development, I think it comes across rapey while it was intended to be like cute romance with 2 ppl also being very much into rough bdsmish dynamic, it was just bad idea to do it together, in a short format and with no discussion at all. I think problems with like writing and developing plot and relationships are evident throughout
Like MC suddenly getting feelings towards ML or suddenly realising them, and smwh ending being concerned if ML feels the same way back, while him now suddenly liking a man or FFS enjoying being talked down at and following smn commands while sex, nah, that wasn't on his mind much smwh
I don't know, call me like rape defender or whtvr, but I just can see intentions of author and how it all kinda fumbled up a bit while execution really clearly
Also Kangsik's face is ...oh my gawd... Low why do I suddenly want to draw it, tho I don't remember last time drawing anything? MC is very pretty too, reminded me of Join from My Master a lot. Hope the artist makes more stuff smth green flag hopefully