[Got carried away and wrote alot, also just realised some translation are different on this site since i had to read on another one for most of the story (ch 8 upwards) as mangago wasnt working, i still wanna leave my review here. But there might be some confusion. (￣∇￣")]
binged alot of chapters in one sitting, got to 113, now im just exhausted from reading this story so much, its okay, but not good enough to keep me hooked on to binge it all in one go, I'll prolly not continue reading this for a while. (TヘT)
Let me start this by saying this isn't an attack on this story, nor a reflection of my judgement on others who do like the story, Im just stating my frustration with some things I didnt find to be entertaining to read in the story. I honestly am not one to care if a story isnt done that well since I have the potential to be entertained by most things if read at the right time. I'm just saying this incase people hear some criticism and just utter " Why did you read it then? Shouldve stopped." As i still found entertainment in reading this, just had a few thoughts. (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)
But here are some of my thoughts: 1. I did not like how they handled the disciples writing.. Yes mc saved there life but does there entire character have to revolve around the fact they are obsessively devoted to him? Sure the older ones i understand to a better extent actually, since they knew him for a very long time and he was something very dear to them ofc, I just dont think you have to blush every second you're with the mc to express it?(ˉ▽ˉ；)...
A weird moment that stuck with me was when kooky said "master will you marry me?" Ofc mc says no, but his response after to the reason he said no was, "Because i dont have time for that right now." something along those lines, I'm like EXCUSE ME? NOT RN? SO YOU WOULD CONSIDER LATER? (￣_￣|||)
I do admit I was just caught off guard at first as scrolling more through the chapter I noticed he did look uncomfortable kinda( maybe uneasy is a better word) , and after hearing that answer(? idk if it was directly after) kooky started going crazy, which is behavior not uncommon to mc as he even has a method to "snap her out of it", so with that info i can reasonable chalk that answer up to the fact that he was probably trying to answer in a way to avoid kooky acting like that, and to avoid the hassle since he has things to do. ╮(╯▽╰)╭
My point in bringing this up is to just question why the author put it like this? Could they not think of any other way the disciples could express their love/devotion for mc? Sigh.. I just Would've loved if they toned that down and made it more normal found family yk? (ノへ￣、)
But the new disciples? nah that just was, alot. Seriously, it was so funny to see other characters in the story also point it out OUTRIGHT to his face that others think he's building a harem BECAUSE I WOULDVE THOUGHT THAT TOO IF I WAS IN THEIR WORLD! THIS IS SUSPICIOUS AS HELL BRUH, and mc is acting like how ever could they POSSIBLY think that T-T gang.. I might have a COUPLE of reasons why.. Give that poor girl (the "first" disciple) a personality PLEASE, I BEG. ( ╯□╰ )
2. Another thing I would like to mention is the fact that It's pretty clear throughout the story that most people treat the constellations words as law. Which I can definitely see why, but that's all the more reason I just couldnt get used to bentricks character just joining the mc like that since It's SO OBVIOUS if the constellation she was under wasnt mc's disciple she definitely would not have liked our mc at ALL, i mean cmon all her actions before this to kill him, and the whole roddik situation was just a MESS, so I was happy that the mc was jsut using her for money, and to do other things with the clans power, but ofc out of nowher, she just randomly starts blushing around him all of a sudden? OVER THE MOST SIMPLE CONVO TOO?? AND HE'S A TEENAGER HERE??? HELLO? ALSO, DO MOSTLY ONLY GIRLS POSSESS THE ABILITY TO BLUSH IN THIS UNIVERSE LMAO. (≧∀≦)
But seriously the 360 personality change was too quick, and way too odd, i understand her obedience since now mc basically has her life in his hands, so adapting to the situation and making peace with it is the best choice, but the way her actions were before, a change that big felt so uncomfy to read considering what i was reading about her literally a FEW chapters ago.
ALSOALSO, her random ass romance with black mask guy, no indications what so ever, just the guy removing his mask and the most bland exchange of words..like seriously?Though I understand her being attracted to him, he is gorgeous, so her actions and behaviors arent that crazy (honestly, It's even relatable to an extent, I too would've been so taken aback if the person I always saw with a mask was such a hottie:D) . But what the flip was the guy blushing over? "Please keep ur mask off around me more" ( Something like that) AND HIS BLUSHING FROM THAT? HOW EASY ARE YOU? AND THE SUDDEN EXTRA CONCERN FOR HER THAT EVEN MC POINTED OUT BY ASKING IF THEY ARE A THING (or if he has a thing for her?) SINCE THIS IS UNUSUAL.. AND ALL THAT BECAUSE OF THAT ONE CONVO?? Honestly, I didnt mind this idea, but just the way it was executed so idiotically made me very irritated as it made no sense, why even bother including this plot line, it adds nothing of substance to the story, and its obvious the author didnt care to put much effort into it, but since its mostly on the sidelines it was whatever, I just found it hard to read through those parts.(〜￣△￣)〜
3. Minor side note, the teacher that thought the mc was asking her out on a date, and when the mc said ofc not, her reaction being more so you need to stop talking to me disrespectfully, instead of a sigh of relief or being thankful, she wasnt in a situation where A STUDENT IS ASKIGN HER OUT? BECAUSE THATS WHAT I THOUGHT SHE WAS GONNA DO, SINCE IT WAS A WEIRD ASSUMPTION TO START WITH, BUT THAT RESPONSE.. someone keep an eye on her because ? Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
4. OKAY LAST THING! I havent read past 113 so maybe im lacking more context on this, but am i the only one who feels for those monsters? Since they dont really have a choice, they have to do this or they become a wandering soul for a very long time, and that sounds like a terrible / torturing existence, and the fact that a name can possibly influence your personality as it was discussed in the case of the tower master, makes the situation a whole lot sadder, then they truly have no choice but to kill, they have no control over there bodily anatomy. ┗( T﹏T )┛
Idk if it was intentional or not but there life resembles that of a slave by definition in my perceptive, so seeing mc mercilessly killing all the monsters was morbidly fascinating since they resemble a somewhat similar life of victims mc inherently wants to protect having been a slave himself when he was younger. Though Ik he def doesnt think of them as that, it just makes me wish that maybe, just like he spared that little kid looking one (pretty sure he did?) he couldve worked out a plan to give them an opportunity to be helped, to find a way to break there connection to that guy, maybe make them give up there name, ending in them being without one, or maybe if they find there relics they can remember there own name? Then make them help him in taking down the final boss. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Ofc im not a writer, but the exploration of mc finding out similarities in how slaves and the monsters were treated could've created an interesting internal mental battle for him as that area is very personal for him, opening a wide range of interesting plot points that couldve been included to the story for a more interesting read, atleast it would've been for me, since I wouldve LOVED to see the plot points i mentioned above in this series as i find the concept so intriguing and entertaining to think about. Ofc, it might not be your taste, you could find it to make no sense, preferring the og narrative plot choices chosen for that, which is completely fine too. I could just be making up my own fanfic just by pure assumptions as I just personally would like that yk? ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄
[Got carried away and wrote alot, also just realised some translation are different on this site since i had to read on another one for most of the story (ch 8 upwards) as mangago wasnt working, i still wanna leave my review here. But there might be some confusion. (￣∇￣")]
binged alot of chapters in one sitting, got to 113, now im just exhausted from reading this story so much, its okay, but not good enough to keep me hooked on to binge it all in one go, I'll prolly not continue reading this for a while. (TヘT)
Let me start this by saying this isn't an attack on this story, nor a reflection of my judgement on others who do like the story, Im just stating my frustration with some things I didnt find to be entertaining to read in the story. I honestly am not one to care if a story isnt done that well since I have the potential to be entertained by most things if read at the right time. I'm just saying this incase people hear some criticism and just utter " Why did you read it then? Shouldve stopped." As i still found entertainment in reading this, just had a few thoughts. (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)
But here are some of my thoughts:
1. I did not like how they handled the disciples writing.. Yes mc saved there life but does there entire character have to revolve around the fact they are obsessively devoted to him? Sure the older ones i understand to a better extent actually, since they knew him for a very long time and he was something very dear to them ofc, I just dont think you have to blush every second you're with the mc to express it?(ˉ▽ˉ；)...
A weird moment that stuck with me was when kooky said "master will you marry me?" Ofc mc says no, but his response after to the reason he said no was, "Because i dont have time for that right now." something along those lines, I'm like EXCUSE ME? NOT RN? SO YOU WOULD CONSIDER LATER? (￣_￣|||)
I do admit I was just caught off guard at first as scrolling more through the chapter I noticed he did look uncomfortable kinda( maybe uneasy is a better word) , and after hearing that answer(? idk if it was directly after) kooky started going crazy, which is behavior not uncommon to mc as he even has a method to "snap her out of it", so with that info i can reasonable chalk that answer up to the fact that he was probably trying to answer in a way to avoid kooky acting like that, and to avoid the hassle since he has things to do. ╮(╯▽╰)╭
My point in bringing this up is to just question why the author put it like this? Could they not think of any other way the disciples could express their love/devotion for mc? Sigh.. I just Would've loved if they toned that down and made it more normal found family yk? (ノへ￣、)
But the new disciples? nah that just was, alot. Seriously, it was so funny to see other characters in the story also point it out OUTRIGHT to his face that others think he's building a harem BECAUSE I WOULDVE THOUGHT THAT TOO IF I WAS IN THEIR WORLD! THIS IS SUSPICIOUS AS HELL BRUH, and mc is acting like how ever could they POSSIBLY think that T-T gang.. I might have a COUPLE of reasons why.. Give that poor girl (the "first" disciple) a personality PLEASE, I BEG. ( ╯□╰ )
2. Another thing I would like to mention is the fact that It's pretty clear throughout the story that most people treat the constellations words as law. Which I can definitely see why, but that's all the more reason I just couldnt get used to bentricks character just joining the mc like that since It's SO OBVIOUS if the constellation she was under wasnt mc's disciple she definitely would not have liked our mc at ALL, i mean cmon all her actions before this to kill him, and the whole roddik situation was just a MESS, so I was happy that the mc was jsut using her for money, and to do other things with the clans power, but ofc out of nowher, she just randomly starts blushing around him all of a sudden? OVER THE MOST SIMPLE CONVO TOO?? AND HE'S A TEENAGER HERE??? HELLO? ALSO, DO MOSTLY ONLY GIRLS POSSESS THE ABILITY TO BLUSH IN THIS UNIVERSE LMAO. (≧∀≦)
But seriously the 360 personality change was too quick, and way too odd, i understand her obedience since now mc basically has her life in his hands, so adapting to the situation and making peace with it is the best choice, but the way her actions were before, a change that big felt so uncomfy to read considering what i was reading about her literally a FEW chapters ago.
ALSOALSO, her random ass romance with black mask guy, no indications what so ever, just the guy removing his mask and the most bland exchange of words..like seriously?Though I understand her being attracted to him, he is gorgeous, so her actions and behaviors arent that crazy (honestly, It's even relatable to an extent, I too would've been so taken aback if the person I always saw with a mask was such a hottie:D) . But what the flip was the guy blushing over? "Please keep ur mask off around me more" ( Something like that) AND HIS BLUSHING FROM THAT? HOW EASY ARE YOU? AND THE SUDDEN EXTRA CONCERN FOR HER THAT EVEN MC POINTED OUT BY ASKING IF THEY ARE A THING (or if he has a thing for her?) SINCE THIS IS UNUSUAL.. AND ALL THAT BECAUSE OF THAT ONE CONVO?? Honestly, I didnt mind this idea, but just the way it was executed so idiotically made me very irritated as it made no sense, why even bother including this plot line, it adds nothing of substance to the story, and its obvious the author didnt care to put much effort into it, but since its mostly on the sidelines it was whatever, I just found it hard to read through those parts.(〜￣△￣)〜
3. Minor side note, the teacher that thought the mc was asking her out on a date, and when the mc said ofc not, her reaction being more so you need to stop talking to me disrespectfully, instead of a sigh of relief or being thankful, she wasnt in a situation where A STUDENT IS ASKIGN HER OUT? BECAUSE THATS WHAT I THOUGHT SHE WAS GONNA DO, SINCE IT WAS A WEIRD ASSUMPTION TO START WITH, BUT THAT RESPONSE.. someone keep an eye on her because ? Σ(っ°Д °;)っ
4. OKAY LAST THING! I havent read past 113 so maybe im lacking more context on this, but am i the only one who feels for those monsters? Since they dont really have a choice, they have to do this or they become a wandering soul for a very long time, and that sounds like a terrible / torturing existence, and the fact that a name can possibly influence your personality as it was discussed in the case of the tower master, makes the situation a whole lot sadder, then they truly have no choice but to kill, they have no control over there bodily anatomy. ┗( T﹏T )┛
Idk if it was intentional or not but there life resembles that of a slave by definition in my perceptive, so seeing mc mercilessly killing all the monsters was morbidly fascinating since they resemble a somewhat similar life of victims mc inherently wants to protect having been a slave himself when he was younger. Though Ik he def doesnt think of them as that, it just makes me wish that maybe, just like he spared that little kid looking one (pretty sure he did?) he couldve worked out a plan to give them an opportunity to be helped, to find a way to break there connection to that guy, maybe make them give up there name, ending in them being without one, or maybe if they find there relics they can remember there own name? Then make them help him in taking down the final boss. (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
Ofc im not a writer, but the exploration of mc finding out similarities in how slaves and the monsters were treated could've created an interesting internal mental battle for him as that area is very personal for him, opening a wide range of interesting plot points that couldve been included to the story for a more interesting read, atleast it would've been for me, since I wouldve LOVED to see the plot points i mentioned above in this series as i find the concept so intriguing and entertaining to think about. Ofc, it might not be your taste, you could find it to make no sense, preferring the og narrative plot choices chosen for that, which is completely fine too. I could just be making up my own fanfic just by pure assumptions as I just personally would like that yk? ⁄(⁄ ⁄·⁄ω⁄·⁄ ⁄)⁄