(⊙…⊙ ) I mean. The pacing isn’t realistic and there isn’t exactly a lot of reason behind the plot other than banging while pregnant.
If that’s your thing, and you like fluffy, no brain smut then congrats, you’ve made it.
If you like more drama in your plot, probably not for you.
Also, the smut situations are insane. Getting the all clear to have sex and then waiting until your washing up dishes at grandma’s to actually do it?? And for some weird reason, they are constantly involving the baby in their sex talk??
Actual things they said:
“YOUR DAD IS OVER THE MOON, DUCK. JUST DON'T BE TOO SHOCKED WHEN SOMETHING HUGE COMES YOUR WAY. THAT'S JUST YOUR DAD, SO GREET HIM NICELY WHEN YOU SEE HIM.”
“HEY, DUCK. DADDY'S COMING IN NOW. TAKE A GOOD LOOK AT YOUR OLD MAN AND KNOW WHAT YOU'LL GROW UP TO BE.”
IM SORRY, WHAT????
I’m not sure if I can endure 77 chapters of this. lmao
(⊙…⊙ )
I mean. The pacing isn’t realistic and there isn’t exactly a lot of reason behind the plot other than banging while pregnant.
If that’s your thing, and you like fluffy, no brain smut then congrats, you’ve made it.
If you like more drama in your plot, probably not for you.
Also, the smut situations are insane. Getting the all clear to have sex and then waiting until your washing up dishes at grandma’s to actually do it?? And for some weird reason, they are constantly involving the baby in their sex talk??
Actual things they said:
“YOUR DAD IS OVER THE MOON, DUCK. JUST DON'T BE TOO SHOCKED WHEN SOMETHING HUGE COMES YOUR WAY. THAT'S JUST YOUR DAD, SO GREET HIM NICELY WHEN YOU SEE HIM.”
“HEY, DUCK. DADDY'S COMING IN NOW. TAKE A GOOD LOOK AT YOUR OLD MAN AND KNOW WHAT YOU'LL GROW UP TO BE.”
IM SORRY, WHAT????
I’m not sure if I can endure 77 chapters of this. lmao