The author is really focusing on the wrong things here.
MC died as a kid, the moment his friend (ML) died, that’s why mc act like such a kid in front of ML every single time, so much that it feels inappropriate, cause he never grew up since that moment, forever stuck.
This could have been a great chance to tell a story about growth, about letting go, about coping with loneliness, about learning to respect people around you and ultimately most important, respect yourself.
But nah, we got a story which predatory feels in intensified, 2 main leads that is ultimately incompatible but just too stubborn, too stuck in their own head to ever see the other person clearly, and even important side characters. Every single one of them is oozing selfishness in a discrete way. What a let down, everything feels out of place.
The author is really focusing on the wrong things here.
MC died as a kid, the moment his friend (ML) died, that’s why mc act like such a kid in front of ML every single time, so much that it feels inappropriate, cause he never grew up since that moment, forever stuck.
This could have been a great chance to tell a story about growth, about letting go, about coping with loneliness, about learning to respect people around you and ultimately most important, respect yourself.
But nah, we got a story which predatory feels in intensified, 2 main leads that is ultimately incompatible but just too stubborn, too stuck in their own head to ever see the other person clearly, and even important side characters. Every single one of them is oozing selfishness in a discrete way. What a let down, everything feels out of place.