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for me the issue isn’t the taboo, but you can’t lie the last 3/4 chapters are extremely underwhelming. a tad bit underbaked doesn’t pull on the emotions and character are too one dimensional. just not well written man.
If it's about the writing then it's ok. But I think that's a problem with a lot of short stories, not enough chapters to properly wrap up. There are exceptions such room without windows, but that kind of story born once in a blue moon.
People in the comments are fvcking hilarious. A short story and ch 3 already had grape. What did you expect from this kind of stuff?